My wife want to lose her\'s weight.

2021-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Don

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Dear [Name], I think, Diet is very difficult process. if someone want to lose weight, never eat when it is evening and night time. I had a little experience for diet and losing weight. Two or three years ago, I decreased my weight about 10 kg for three weeks. In my remember, I didn\'t eat dinner any more at the time. When I was beginning, I thought it was very hungry and It was very difficult time for a day. but after one week, it was better than beginning. I think, my stomach size decreased, so I didn\'t feel hungry than before. My wife warry about my health situation, because I lose my weight rapidly. Now, my wife want to lose her\'s weight, because my nephew will get merried this month. After wedding, it will take a picture with all familly. My wife want good fit with her\'s clothes. In my case, never mind for my clothes. I gave up my fit. I want to enjoy a delicious food!!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Sorry I checked your composition just now. I was too busy so now I\'m checking it. See you later ^^

T. DON

Dear [Name],

I think, Diet is very difficult process. if someone want to lose weight, never eat when it is evening and night time.
>> I think, having a diet is a very difficult process. If someone want to lose weight, never eat in the evening or at night time.

I had a little experience for diet and losing weight.
>> I had a little experience in dieting and losing weight.

Two or three years ago, I decreased my weight about 10 kg for three weeks. In my remember, I didn\'t eat dinner any more at the time.
>> Two or three years ago, I decreased (or lost) my weight at about 10 kg for three weeks. From what I remember, I didn\'t have dinner (or I didn\'t eat something for dinner) at the time.

When I was beginning, I thought it was very hungry and It was very difficult time for a day. but after one week, it was better than beginning. I think, my stomach size decreased, so I didn\'t feel hungry than before.
>> When I was starting my diet, I thought I was very hungry and It was very difficult day for me not to eat but after one week, it was better and I was starting to get used to it. I think my stomach size decreased, so I didn\'t feel hungry than before.

My wife warry about my health situation, because I lose my weight rapidly.
>> My wife worries about my health situation, because I lose my weight rapidly.

Now, my wife want to lose her\'s weight, because my nephew will get merried this month.
>> Now, my wife wants to lose her weight, because my nephew will get married this month.

After wedding, it will take a picture with all familly. My wife want good fit with her\'s clothes.
>> After the wedding, she will take a picture with all the famillies. My wife wants her clothes to be perfect and fit for her. 

In my case, never mind for my clothes. I gave up my fit. I want to enjoy a delicious food!!
>> In my case, I don\'t mind on the clothes that I am wearing. I gave up on being fit. I want to enjoy delicious food!! ( kkkk)

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