My wish
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have one wish now, it would be better to speak and listen to English.
I try to study English in various ways, but I still don\'t speak English well.
Due to this situation, I was disappointed myself.
I also think that I am not learned second language in a day.
This idea comforts me.
These days I am full of thoughts about English.
They are pronunciation, basic sentences, vocabulary, listening and others.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Keep the spirit!
I know you can\'t see it now but it will happen.
Be patient and keep believing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I have one wish now, it would be better to speak and listen to English.
>> If I have one wish now, it would be better if I could speak in and listen to English well.
I try to study English in various ways, but I still don\'t speak English well.
I try to study English in various ways, but I still don\'t speak English well.
>> I try to study English in various ways, but I still can\'t speak English well.
Due to this situation, I was disappointed myself.
Due to this situation, I was disappointed myself.
>> Due to this situation, I feel disappointed in myself.
I also think that I am not learned second language in a day.
I also think that I am not learned second language in a day.
>> I also think that I can\'t learn a second language in day.
This idea comforts me.
This idea comforts me.
>> Correct
These days I am full of thoughts about English.
These days I am full of thoughts about English.
>> I think a lot about English these days.
They are pronunciation, basic sentences, vocabulary, listening and others.
They are pronunciation, basic sentences, vocabulary, listening and others.
>> I think about pronunciation, basic sentences, vocabulary, listening and others.
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