My wish
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a wish which is being a one hundred million You Tuber. I actually have YouTube Chanel named Marde_ender. The reason why I made the name in English is for foreigner subscriber. Now l have only one hundred subscribers. If I have one hundred million subscribers, I could make money on my own and I would be thrilled.
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T. DON
I have a wish which is being a one hundred million You Tuber. I actually
have YouTube Chanel named Marde_ender. The reason why I made the name
in English is for foreigner subscriber. Now l have only one hundred
subscribers. If I have one hundred million subscribers, I could make
money on my own and I would be thrilled.
>> I have a wish which is to have one hundred million YouTube subscribers. I actually
have YouTube Chanel named Marde_ender. The reason why I made the name
in English is for foreign subscribers. Now l have only one hundred
subscribers. If I have one hundred million subscribers, I could make
money on my own and I would be thrilled.
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