My wish this summer
학생이 쓴 원문
What I am looking forward to most this summer is going abroad to meet missionaries.
The reason is that I want to know about the mission situations in the Philippines and I also want to help whatever I can do.
This is one of my plans before COVID19, and I haven\'t yet made it.
I am worrying because the flight has no a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
You have some really good plans here.
I hope they will come true.
You deserve a meaningful vacation.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
What I am looking forward to most this summer is going abroad to meet missionaries.
>> Correct
The reason is that I want to know about the mission situations in the Philippines and I also want to help whatever I can do.
The reason is that I want to know about the mission situations in the Philippines and I also want to help whatever I can do.
>> The reason is that I want to know about the mission situations in the Philippines and I also want to help however I can.
This is one of my plans before COVID19, and I haven\'t yet made it.
This is one of my plans before COVID19, and I haven\'t yet made it.
>> This is one of my plans before COVID19, and I haven\'t done it yet.
I am worrying because the flight has no a lot.
I am worrying because the flight has no a lot.
>> I am worried because there aren\'t a lot of flights available.
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