My wishes
학생이 쓴 원문
I have to many wishes.
First, I want to have Nintendo switch game microchips.
Because ‘Nintendo switch’ is my favorite video game.
Second, I want to go to Nasa.
Because I will be an astronaut, so I want to visit Nasa.
They are my wishes.
강사 첨삭
Hi Paul! You did amazing on your homework! I like that you provided details. Thank you.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
>>I have too many wishes.
OR>>I have a lot of wishes.
First, I want to have Nintendo switch game microchips.
>>CORRECT
Because ‘Nintendo switch’ is my favorite video game.
>>CORRECT
Second, I want to go to Nasa.
>>Second, I want to be part of NASA.
Because I will be an astronaut, so I want to visit Nasa.
>>Because I will be an astronaut so I want to visit NASA.
They are my wishes.
>>These are my wishes.
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