My work 2
학생이 쓴 원문
Page 5
Blogs consistently upload 2 contents a day.
That way, our blogs are exposed to the top of the portal site.
Page 6
I\'ve revised the catalog.
The revised catalog is the Filter catalog.
In Korea, a new product called JFII will be released this time, and I revised the catalog at the request of the sales team.
I paid for the catalog printing at clean energy support.
It\'s about 1815 dollars.
Page 7
Our budget for the search advertisement hasn\'t been finalized yet, so we\'ve only proceeded with keywords related to air dryers.
I\'ll get the rest of the keywords back on live when the budget is set.
Page 8
We couldn\'t even run the magazine ads because our budget wasn\'t fixed.
Instead, each magazine gave us a service.
So I ran two magazine ads last month.
강사 첨삭
Page 5
Blogs consistently upload 2 contents a day.
>> Correct.
That way, our blogs are exposed to the top of the portal site.
>> Correct.
Page 6
I\'ve revised the catalog.
>> Correct.
The revised catalog is the Filter catalog.
>> The revised catalog is in the \"Filter catalog\".
In Korea, a new product called JFII will be released this time, and I revised the catalog at the request of the sales team.
>> In Korea, a new product called \"JFII\" will be released around this time, and I revised the catalog at the request of the sales team.
I paid for the catalog printing at clean energy support.
>> Correct.
It\'s about 1815 dollars.
>> It\'s about 1,815 dollars.
Page 7
Our budget for the search advertisement hasn\'t been finalized yet, so we\'ve only proceeded with keywords related to air dryers.
>> Our budget for the search advertisement hasn\'t been finalized yet, so we\'ve only proceeded with keywords relating to air dryers.
I\'ll get the rest of the keywords back on live when the budget is set.
>> I\'ll get the rest of the keywords back online when the budget is set.
Page 8
We couldn\'t even run the magazine ads because our budget wasn\'t fixed.
>> Correct.
Instead, each magazine gave us a service.
>> Correct.
So I ran two magazine ads last month.
>> Correct.
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