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Hello, there!^^
How are you? Are you feeling great~?
I am so sorry to hear that your girlfriend was sick T^T
Anyways, thanks for sending this in!^^
Keep on writing!^^
Do take good care of her, okay? [I know you will.^^]
Have a great day!^^
my girl friend was sick last week.
>>CORRECT! [capitalization]
I was worried about her condition.
>>CORRECT!
because she have not been ill that before.
>>Because she had not been that ill before.
I took her to hospital.
>>I took her to the hospital.
We arrived hospital late time so the operation time was over.
>>We arrived at the hospital late so the available schedule for operation was over.
We had only one choice which meaned enroll the emergency room.
>>We had only one choice which meant I had to bring her to the emergency room.
She filled out some document and someone came to her.
>>She filled out some documents and someone came to see her.
When I saw him for the first time,
I knew that he is doctor.
>>When I saw him for the first time, I knew he is a doctor.
But he was just resident, which means he was pre-doctor.
>>But he is just a resident, which means he is just a trainee.
My girl friend didn\'t get enough medical service.
>>CORRECT!
I was angry with it.
>>I was angry about it.
But there were so many people who were sick.
>>CORRECT!
So I tolerate that.
>>So that situation was tolerable.
now, her condition is better than that.
>>Now, her condition is better than before.^^
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