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2021-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

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By the way, Scott, what should we do with our goals this year? We set similar goals every year in Korea. The production of catalogs, road shows, and advertisements and materials. For your information, the goals we established last year were as follows. 2020 Common objectives for departments 1. Creating a new catalog of all dryers 2. Planning and implementing PCM road shows 3. Creating Integrated Sales Resources 2020 Personal Goals (Ha Youngna) 1. Planning and implementing online marketing 2. Making a video 3. Publishing a newsletter 4. Host a customer-invited road show 2020 Personal Goals (Yoon Minjeong) 1. Support for product development design 2. Production of posters and advertisements 3. Execution of magazine advertisements 4. Creating a catalog of new products 5. Production of online and offline videos

강사 첨삭

By the way, Scott, what should we do with our goals this year?
>> Correct.
 
We set similar goals every year in Korea.
>> Correct.
 
The production of catalogs, road shows, and advertisements and materials.
>> The production of catalogs, roadshows, and advertisements and materials are the same. 
 
For your information, the goals we established last year were as follows.
>> Correct.
 
2020 Common objectives for departments
>> Correct.
 
1. Creating a new catalog of all dryers
>> Correct.

2. Planning and implementing PCM road shows
>>  Planning and implementing PCM roadshows.
 
3. Creating Integrated Sales Resources
>> Correct.
 
2020 Personal Goals (Ha Youngna)
>> Correct.
 
1. Planning and implementing online marketing
>> Correct.
 
2. Making a video
>> Correct.
 
3. Publishing a newsletter
>> Correct.
 
4. Host a customer-invited road show
>> Correct. 
 

2020 Personal Goals (Yoon Minjeong)
>> Correct.
 
1. Support for product development design
>> Correct.
 
2. Production of posters and advertisements
>> Correct.
 
3. Execution of magazine advertisements
>> Correct.
 
4. Creating a catalog of new products
>> Correct.
 
5. Production of online and offline videos
>> Correct.
 

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