My work 6
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, last year\'s Corona19 did not lead to road show hosting and newsletter production.
How should we set our goals for this year?
If there is no suggestion, I would like to set a goal in the same way as below.
2021 Common Objectives for Departments
1. Revisions to the Catalogue
2. Conducting customer invitation events
3. Business support to boost sales
2021 Personal Goals (Ha Youngna)
1. Planning and implementing online marketing
2. Planning and supporting customer-invited events
3. The process of integrating online content
2021 Personal Goals (Yoon Minjeong)
1. Support for product development design
2. Revisions to the Catalog
3. Production of online and offline videos and images
I\'ll send you these by e-mail.
I\'m gonna have to think about it.
강사 첨삭
Of course, last year\'s Corona19 did not lead to road show hosting and newsletter production.
>> Of course, last year\'s Corona19 did not lead to roadshow hosting and newsletter production.
How should we set our goals for this year?
>> Correct.
If there is no suggestion, I would like to set a goal in the same way as below.
>> Correct.
2021 Common Objectives for Departments
>> Correct.
1. Revisions to the Catalogue
>> Correct.
2. Conducting customer invitation events
>> Correct.
3. Business support to boost sales
>> Correct.
2021 Personal Goals (Ha Youngna)
>> Correct.
1. Planning and implementing online marketing
>> Correct.
2. Planning and supporting customer-invited events
>> Correct.
3. The process of integrating online content
>> Correct.
2021 Personal Goals (Yoon Minjeong)
>> Correct.
1. Support for product development design
>> Correct.
2. Revisions to the Catalog
>> Correct.
3. Production of online and offline videos and images
>> Correct.
I\'ll send you these by e-mail.
>> Correct.
I\'m gonna have to think about it.
>> Correct.
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