My work and dream

My job is physical theraphist. I work at family medicine clinic. There are treatment from flue to ostheoarthritis. My client complain that they sick at back and knee and wrist or shoulder.  To repeat habit or movement cause these pain. Patients need to change their habit. I teach corrrction motion and treat their pain. It is important that to change their habit.  I like my work. I am interested human body. For example, to make beautiful body shape and to depress pain during activity daily living.  My job is precious and fun for me. I want to become good therapist. It's my dream. 

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You did a good job in writing this composition. You were able to share a lot of your thoughts regarding your job. You seem to be very good at it. Anyway, these are my corrections:

T. Joanna

My job is physical theraphist.

>>I am a physical therapist.

I work at family medicine clinic.

>> I work at a Family Medical Clinic.

There are treatment from flue to ostheoarthritis.

>> There are treatments for flu and ostheoarthritis.

My client complain that they sick at back and knee and wrist or shoulder. 
>> My clients complain that they have pains on their backs, knees, and wrists or shoulders.        

To repeat habit or movement cause these pain.

>> Repeated habits or movements cause these pain.

Patients need to change their habit.

>> Patients need to change their habits.

I teach corrrction motion and treat their pain.

>> I teach correct motion and treat their pain.

It is important that to change their habit. 
>> It is important to change their habits.

I like my work.

>>Correct

I am interested human body.

>> I am interested in the human body.

For example, to make beautiful body shape and to depress pain during activity daily living. 
>> For example, to keep and maintain a beautiful body shape and to depress pain to enjoy daily living activities.
My job is precious and fun for me.

>>Correct

I want to become good therapist.

>> I want to become a good therapist.

It's my dream.

>>Correct