my work place

2012-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I work at the Daejeon Catholic University Library. It's on vacation now. All students that lived in the dormitory left for their home. My library is located under the mountine. It's difficult to visit here. There is nobody to use a library. And it's not heating all of university building except work place. It's very cold here. I hate the cold. Today, it snowed a lot. I'm concerned that how can I go home. I like my job, but I don't like my work place.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Miss. [Name], Thank you so much for dropping in your composition.. You did a great job in making your composition my dear, keep up the good work..:) I\'ll talk to you again later Miss. [Name] and have a good day..^^ - Teacher Cam -   I work at the Daejeon Catholic University Library. >>I work at Daejon catholic University Library.It\'s on vacation now. >>Students are on vacation now. All students that lived in the dormitory left for their home. >>correct!My library is located under the mountine. >>Our library is located in the mountain.It\'s difficult to visit here. >>correct!There is nobody to use a library.>>correct!And it\'s not heating all of university building except work place. >>correct!It\'s very cold here. I hate the cold. >>Its very cold in here and I hate it!Today, it snowed a lot. >>correct! >>Today it snowed heavily.I\'m concerned that how can I go home. >>I\'m worried on how to go home.I like my job, but I don\'t like my work place. >>correct!    

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