My workout

2011-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Carly

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I don't specialy workout. when I did regularly workout is six years ago. No workout period is long time, and I am feeling my body is heavy. so I have feltten it needing workout. These days I am trying to fast walk. I run from subway station to company for 5minute. Maybe I guess you think very small workout about it. But two month ago, I did hard for running 100m distance. I hope no potbelly body. And my favorit type of workout is yoga and dance. Both workout is no well. but I like these. The yoga is my body and mind is make flexable. The dance give me energy. See you in the morning, thank you~.

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Hi there. I had a lot of fun reading your composition. It\'s very interesting to know about your exercise habit, and thank you for sharing that with me. I do agree about Yoga, so I think it\'s the bestexercise for you as a whole. I made some corrections and suggestions with regards to the sentences you\'ve made. Check them out. (^_^) Teacher Faye   I don\'t specialy workout. >>I don\'t workout.when I did regularly workout is six years ago. >>My last workout was six years ago.No workout period is long time, and I am feeling my body is heavy. >>Having no workout in a long period of time, my body is starting to feel heavy.so I have feltten it needing workout. >>So I have fatten and in need of a workout.These days I am trying to fast walk. >>These days, I am trying to walk fast. >>OR These days, I am trying to brisk walk.I run from subway station to company for 5minute. >>I run from the subway station to the company for 5minutes.Maybe I guess you think very small workout about it. >>I guess you think it\'s a very small workout.But two month ago, I did hard for running 100m distance. >> But two month ago, I did hard for running for 100m of distance.I hope no potbelly body. >>I hope I won\'t have a potbelly kind of body.And my favorit type of workout is yoga and dance. >> And my favorite type of workout is yoga and dance.Both workout is no well. >>Both workout didn\'t work for me.but I like these. >>CORRECTThe yoga is my body and mind is make flexable. >>Yoga makes my body and mind flexible.The dance give me energy.>>The dance gives me energy.See you in the morning, thank you~. >>CORRECT

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