my worry
학생이 쓴 원문
What can I do when I become over 80?
It is shameful to live as a burden to the society and country .
I don\'t want to imagine my future as receiving a pension and going to the hospital.
I filled out a life support refusal application in this summer with my husband.
I feel good.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
There are various things that I\'ve observed when a person reaches the age of 80. Some stay home, while for those who have farms still go and \"visit\" their lands for sightseeing. I\'m thinking too, what would my life be like when I reach that age? I hope I won\'t be a burden to my family.
Aki~
What can I do when I become over 80?
>>> What can I do when I turn over 80?
It is shameful to live as a burden to the society and country .
>>> It is shameful to live as a burden to society and the country.
I don\'t want to imagine my future as receiving a pension and going to the hospital.
>>> CORRECT!
I filled out a life support refusal application in this summer with my husband.
>>> I filled out a life support refusal application this summer with my husband.
I feel good.
>>> CORRECT!
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