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Through the development of modern media, the way how to share people’s opinions have became different. However there are still useful materials such as comics and books which are published by papers. Especially comics have vital merits that people can comprehend easily and approximate casually. Although a certain comic is not funny, people are used to read and watch the pictures of comic. Therefore they should be used to communicate for messes as tool of campaign. On the other hand, they cannot get a great deal of complicated contents like sophisticated knowledges and long stories than books. Many of them were written to send information and leave wisdom. We use the records that inherit by ancestors to comfort our lives. In other words, we have communicated with our forefathers by papers.

Hi there! You did a good job in creating this composition! You were able to express your thoughts regarding paper media. This is indeed an effective communication tool. These are my corrections: -T. Cherry-   Through the development of modern media, the way how to share people’s opinions have became different. >> Through the development of modern media, the way to share people's opinions have become different. However there are still useful materials such as comics and books which are published by papers. >>However there are still some useful materials such as comics and books which are published on paper. Especially comics have vital merits that people can comprehend easily and approximate casually. >>Correct Although a certain comic is not funny, people are used to read and watch the pictures of comic. >> Although a certain comic is not funny, people are used to reading and watching the pictures of comics. Therefore they should be used to communicate for messes as tool of campaign. >>Therefore they should be used to communicate messages like a tool. On the other hand, they cannot get a great deal of complicated contents like sophisticated knowledges and long stories than books. >> On the other hand, they cannot get a great deal of complicated contents like sophisticated knowledge and long stories unlike books. Many of them were written to send information and leave wisdom. >>Correct We use the records that inherit by ancestors to comfort our lives. >>We use the records that we inherited from our ancestors to make our lives comfortable. In other words, we have communicated with our forefathers by papers. >>Correct