my younger brother!!
학생이 쓴 원문
my brother is younger!
brother is 12 years old
brother is very strong...
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Minji! I am glad to know about your brother. Wow! Why did you say that he is very strong? Do you think he is stronger than you? Anyway baby, here are my corrections for you. Please study them. I will talk to you later. Just have fun and enjoy for now.
-Teacher Chloe
my brother is younger!
>>My brother is younger than me.
>>I have a younger brother.he is 12 years old
>>He is 12 years old.
>>He is 12 years of age. he is very strong...
>>He is very strong.
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