My Younger Sister

2012-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Let me introduce my younger sister,Ji yun. She is ten years old. She doesn't like bugs. Actually,My house has a few of mosquitos. So,she doesn't like mosquitos. She doesn't want to study. She likes to play. So,she is very playful. Also,She likes to read comic books. She sometimes read novels. And she often make her own comic books. She sometimes get angry with my mom. But I love her a lot.

강사 첨삭

Hey there!! I appreciate you for doing your homework...Have a great weekend T. Jane 1.Let me introduce my younger sister,Ji yun. >>CORRECT2. She is ten years old. >>CORRECT3. She doesn\'t like bugs. >>CORRECT4. Actually,My house has a few of mosquitos. >> There are few mosquitoes in my house.5. So,she doesn\'t like mosquitos. >> CORRECT 6. She doesn\'t want to study. >> CORRECT 7. She likes to play. >> CORRECT 8. So,she is very playful. >> And, she is very playful. 9.Also,She likes to read comic books. >>CORRECT10. She sometimes read novels. >>CORRECT >>OR >> She reads novels sometimes.11. And she often make her own comic books. >> And she often makes her own comic books.12. She sometimes get angry with my mom. >> She sometimes gets angry with my mom.13.But I love her a lot. >>CORRECT >>OR >>But I love her much.

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