my younger sister

2012-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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my sister is scary. because sister my injure. I am very scary..!! and ugly **

강사 첨삭

Hi there! I\'m so sorry to hear that you are not in good term with your sister. Sometimes it\'s really hard to understand why our siblings needs to hit us hard until we are injured but I just hope that you still care for her because she is still your sister. Maybe you can stay away from her everytime you\'re at home so that she will not cause you harm anymore. Do not annoy her or ignore her if you\'re at home. I\'ll see you in class!^_^ ---T. Daisy --- Here\'s my corrections for you: my sister is scary. because sister my injure.>>>My sister is scary because she hits me sometimes. >>>I am scared of my sister because she sometimes injures me. I am very scary..!! >>> I am scared of her. >>> I am very scared of her. >>> I am afraid of her. and ugly ** >>>She\'s ugly too. 

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