my younger sister

2011-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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My younger sister's friend came back from the Philippines. She went to the Philippines because she needed to study english. She and my younger sister was in the same class but I don't know if she will become the higher level because the effect is great. She and my younger sister played until 6:30! because of playing so much. My younger sister is sleeping. She started sleeping from 8:00

강사 첨삭

Hi Joey, Yeah, a lot of students come to the Philippines to study English, especially during winter. Let's talk about it later. -RJ My younger sister's friend came back from the Philippines. >>correctShe went to the Philippines because she needed to study english. >>She went to the Philippines because she needed to study English.She and my younger sister was in the same class but I don't know if she will become the higher level because the effect is great. >>She and my younger sister was in the same class but I don't know if she will go to a higher level because the effect was great.She and my younger sister played until 6:30! >>correct  because of playing so much. My younger sister is sleeping. She started sleeping from 8:00 >>My younger sister is sleeping because of playing so much. She started sleeping from 8:00.

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