Myeongseongsan
학생이 쓴 원문
That mountain is popular with silver grass in fall.Of course we can enjoy hiking every season with the cool and wonderful falls,valleys , and pretty wildflowers and trees. But I like the mountain because of silver grass and fall leaves the most. The silver grass glittering in sunshine is stunning. Also seeing the silver grass in the red sunset was a unforgettable beauty ~
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
It seems like a really nice and relaxing place based on what you\'ve mentioned. I think these kinds of places should be preserved because they are rare. It\'s nice to know you had a great time on your vacation.
- T. Caitlyn
That mountain is popular with silver grass in fall.>> That mountain is popular for its silver grass in the fall.
Of course we can enjoy hiking every season with the cool and wonderful falls,valleys , and pretty wildflowers and trees.
>> Of course, we can enjoy hiking in every season with the cool and wonderful waterfalls, valleys, and pretty wildflowers and trees.
But I like the mountain because of silver grass and fall leaves the most.
>> CORRECT
The silver grass glittering in sunshine is stunning.
>> The silver grass glittering in the sunshine is stunning.
Also seeing the silver grass in the red sunset was a unforgettable beauty
>> Also, seeing the silver grass in the red sunset was an unforgettable beauty.
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