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When I was young, I was gorgeous I was proposed by many men and I was prettier than now^^
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Very interesting, [이름]! I think you still look pretty today. Your husband must feel lucky to be the chosen one kkkkk. Thank you for your answer!
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
I was gorgeous I was proposed by many men and I was prettier than now^^
>> I was gorgeous, and several men proposed to me. Also, I was prettier than I am now. ^^
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