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If people have children after marriage, they should spend time and physical strength for their children rather than for them
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I agree with you, [이름]! People should definitely take responsibility of their children after marriage instead of just focusing on themselves. Thank you for your answer! (^・ω・^ )
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
they should spend time and physical strength for their children rather than for them
>> they should spend time and dedicate their physical energy to their children rather than for themselves.
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