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학생이 쓴 원문
These days, I spend a lot of time with my neighbor. She lives in the same building as me.We have known each other since we went to Japanese language academy. I\'m working out with her and our children are the same age, so we\'re hanging out together.
강사 첨삭
Your use of commas in this composition is perfect, [이름]. You placed them correctly. I think it\'s cool that both of you also went to the same language academy! I wonder if your neighbor is also fluent in Japanese. Thank you for your answer!
~T.Harmony <3
>> These days, I have been spending a lot of time with my neighbor.
She lives in the same building as me.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> We live in the same building.
We have known each other since we went to Japanese language academy.
>> ...known each other ever since we studied in a Japanese language academy.
I\'m working out with her and our children are the same age, so we\'re hanging out together.
>> CORRECT!
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