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In Korea, people think how they look to others is important.And many people are sensitive to fashion and want to buy it. I am ashamed that Korea is the No. 1 luxury consumer
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Thank you for sharing your personal opinion about Korea being the no.1 luxury consumer, [이름]. Have a wonderful night ahead! <3
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
OR>> In Korea, people give too much importance to the way they look.
And many people are sensitive to fashion and want to buy it.
>> CORRECT!
I am ashamed that Korea is the No. 1 luxury consumer
>> CORRECT!
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