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I heard for the first time that many teenagers in Korea are using drugs. There should be no such thing as teenagers taking drugs from a child-rearing standpoint.It\'s a life-threatening thing
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Thank your for that answer, [이름]! I agree that it\'s indeed not a good thing for teenagers to use drugs because it also imposes health risks that could be fatal. Let\'s hope the government is working on decreasing the rate of drug-use.
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
OR>> This is my first time hearing about the drug situation in Korea among teenagers.
There should be no such thing as teenagers taking drugs from a child-rearing standpoint.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s a life-threatening thing
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