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2023-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Harmony

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In Korea, children go to academies after school because almost many children\'s mothers do so, and if they don\'t, they think they are falling behind other children I think Korea\'s education policy is wrong

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In Korea, children go to academies after school because almost many children\'s mothers do so, and if they don\'t, they think they are falling behind other children

>> CORRECT!

I think Korea\'s education policy is wrong

>> CORRECT!

OR>> In my opinion, the educational system of Korea is wrong and should be corrected.

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