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2023-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Harmony

학생이 쓴 원문

Being a mother is really hard.There are things you have to give up for the child and you have to fit everything into the child. But the child is so lovely that I can forget the difficulties.

강사 첨삭

I\'m honestly touched by your answer, [이름].  It was a wholesome and sincere one. Nothing can really beat a mother\'s love for her child. 
~T.Harmony <3

Being a mother is really hard.
>> CORRECT!
There are things you have to give up for the child and you have to fit everything into the child. 
>> CORRECT!
OR>> ...and you have to make sure that everything goes well for the child.
But the child is so lovely that I can forget the difficulties.
>> CORRECT!

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