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Hello [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework! I know how busy you are, but you still made time for it. Your dedication is commendable, and I appreciate your hard work.
Also, your insights on digital products are thoughtful. You\'re absolutely right that they play a crucial role in making our lives comfortable and efficient.
Keep up the great work!
~Teacher Cathy
It would be very uncomfortable if there were no digital products in our lives.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Without digital products, life would become uncomfortable.
It would take more time and manpower to handle everything.
>> CORRECT
OR>> More time and people would be needed to manage everything.
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