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2024-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

1.Hello,my name is Ethan and I\'m 7 years old. 2.Today,I want to talk about the importance of trees. 3.Trees are beautiful. 4.The brown wood and the green leaves are Pleasing to the eyes. 5.A garden full of trees in bloom is lovely Sight too. 6.They provide birds a home and shelter. 7.Trees give us fruits. 8.It gives us shade. 9.Above all it gives us much need air. 10.But today because of man\'s greed trees are being cut down I\'m large numbers. 11.Yet there were a time people used to gather together under large trees 12.They met,they talked,they made friends with each other. 13.But those good old days are gone. 14.Let us bring back those beautiful memories. 15.by planting more and more trees. 16.Thank you for listening. That\'s all. It was hard to write this paper for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], 

I want to share some tips to help Ethan improve his speaking skills. 

Firstly, remember that stress is important in English. When you see underlined words, it means you should stress them when you say them out loud. Stressing the right words can make your speech clearer and more natural. 

Additionally, here are a few more tips: 

Pay attention to the rhythm of English sentences. English has a natural flow, so try to mimic it when you speak. 

Practice speaking slowly and clearly. This can help you avoid mistakes and make it easier for others to understand you. 

Don\'t be afraid to make mistakes! Practice makes perfect, so keep speaking, and don\'t worry too much about being perfect. And by the way, Ethan is doing great! Let’s practice again on Monday. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

1.Hello,my name is Ethan and I\'m 7 years old. 

>>Hello (stressed, high pitch), my name is Ethan (stressed) and I\'m 7 years old! (high pitch) (big smile) 

2.Today,I want to talk about the importance of trees. 

>>Today (stressed), I want to talk about the importance (stressed) of trees (stressed). 

3.Trees are beautiful. 

>>Trees (stressed) are beautiful (stressed). 

4.The brown wood and the green leaves are Pleasing to the eyes. 

>>The brown wood (stressed) and green leaves (stressed) are pleasing (stressed) to the eyes (stressed). 

5.A garden full of trees in bloom is lovely Sight too. 

>>A garden full of trees in bloom (stressed) is a lovely sight (stressed) too (high pitch)! 

6.They provide birds a home and shelter. 

>>They provide (stressed) birds a home (stressed) and shelter (stressed). 

7.Trees give us fruits. 

>>Trees give us fruits

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