Myhomework
학생이 쓴 원문
1) I like blue T-shirt over there better than the red one.(I'm not sure if there is necessary 'the' in front of blue shirt)
2) Their car does 150 miles an hour.(Does it mesan that the car drives 150miles per hour?)
3) Where's the USB drive I lent you last week?
4) Do you still live in Bristol?
5) Is your mother working in an old office building?
Aurora!
I think I got into the slum!!!I got sick because of the swollen tonsils. And I found out that I was giving excuses to my sick for not being able to study....
I so slumsy and weak as kitten physial and mentally.
I really want some your advice..seeing that you are always energetic and powerful.
강사 첨삭
I didn\'t know that you\'re going through that. I\'m glad you told me about it.
Sickness and the feeling of being too tired to do any studying is your body and mind\'s way of telling you that you\'re exhausted and over fatigued. You cannot force information into you if you\'re in that condition.
Take a break from studying even for just one day. Go somewhere relaxing and quiet or do something where you will forget about your studies for a while. Ride a roller coaster and scream as loud as you can.
What I do when I\'m feeling the same way as you do is I either play tennis and hit the ball as strong as I can to release all the tension and frustration I\'m feeling. Sometimes I dance and I dance like I\'ve never danced before. This is how I let go of all the stress and deal with with my problems. Find out what works out for you more but don\'t do it for too long. You always need to go back and face your responsibilities as a student. Always remember that there\'s no other way out from a problem or a bad situation but to deal with it head on. You can\'t run away from it. So after you\'ve released all the tension, go back to your studies. ^^ Hopefully by that time you\'d be prepared mentally to absorb more information. You may even be surprised how easy you learn your lessons after having been refreshed.
I hope that helps Martha. See you later!
T. Aurora
1) I like blue T-shirt over there better than the red one.(I\'m not sure if there is necessary \'the\' in front of blue shirt)
>>I like the blue T-shirt over there better than the red one. (I\'m not sure if it\'s necessary to put \'the\' before \'blue shirt\'.)2) Their car does 150 miles an hour.(Does it mesan that the car drives 150miles per hour?)
>>Correct! (It means the car is fast enough to travel 150 miles an hour.)3) Where\'s the USB drive I lent you last week?
>>Correct!4) Do you still live in Bristol?
>>Correct!
5) Is your mother working in an old office building?>>Correct!Aurora! I think I got into the slum!!!
>>Correct!
I got sick because of the swollen tonsils.
>>I got sick because of my tonsilitis.
And I found out that I was giving excuses to my sick for not being able to study....
>>And I found out that I\'m making my sickness as an excuse not to study.I so slumsy and weak as kitten physial and mentally.
>>I\'m so clumsy and weak as a kitten physically and mentally.I really want some your advice..seeing that you are always energetic and powerful.
>>I really want some of your advice seeing that you are always energetic and powerful.
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