mythical creature
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What kind of mythical creature would you like to see? Why?
I would like to see a dragon. It is because I w[이름] to see a dragon in person and fly with it. If I see a very huge dragon, I seem to feel grand, but I hope that the dragon prey me on. I think I might feel various feelings.
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Hi [이름]!
Thank you for taking time to answer the question. Here are some of the corrections, but other than that, you did great. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I would like to see a dragon.
>> CORRECT!
It is because I w[이름] to see a dragon in person and fly with it.
>> CORRECT!
If I see a very huge dragon, I seem to feel grand, but I hope that the dragon prey me on.
>> If I see a very huge dragon, I seem to feel grand, but I hope that the dragon would not attack me.
I think I might feel various feelings.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think I might feel different emotions.
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