n your country are the responsibilities of a mother the same as the responsibilities of a father to
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my parent generation has a clear different role. Fathers earn money and mothers do housework. However, it is changing these days. Father and mother earn money together and they share housework. I think it is because women have more chances to work and a high price of a house which forces the couple to have more income.
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my parent generation has a clear different role.
>> My parent\'s generation has clearly different roles.
Fathers earn money and mothers do housework.
>> CORRECT
However, it is changing these days.
>> CORRECT
Father and mother earn money together and they share housework.
>> The Father and The Mother earns money together and they share house work.
I think it is because women have more chances to work and a high price of a house which forces the couple to have more income.
>> CORRECT
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