Nail art!

2013-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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Today, I decorated my nail! I painted with yellow, green, pink color~~^^ It looked pretty~ It was fun even though it smelled not good and also terrible! Later, I will decorate my toenail~ I painted only a big toe!! I want to decorate my friend's nail~^^

강사 첨삭

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T. Heidi^^

 Today, I decorated my nail!

>>I decorated my nails today.
I painted with yellow, green, pink color~~^^

>>I painted it with yellow, green and pink.
It looked pretty~

>>It looks pretty.
It was fun even though it smelled not good and also terrible!

>>It was fun even though it smelled terrible.
Later, I will decorate my toenail~

>>I will decorate my toenail later.
I painted only a big toe!!

>>I finished polishing my big toe.^^
I want to decorate my friend\'s nail~^^

>>CORRECT [nails]^^

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