Name a place in your country you could recommend other to visit. Describe this place and explain why

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Thank you for doing your homework. I hope to visit your beautiful hometown someday. You\'ve mentioned great things about your place in the class. I am pretty sure that people will enjoy their vacation there.^^

~Kelly^^

I will recommend Tongyeong that is my hometown.

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>> I will recommend Tongyeong, that is my hometown.
There are two reasons why I choose the city.

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The first reason is that, it has a cable car which is longest one in my country.

>> The first reason is that, it has a cable car which is the longest one in my country.
The second reason is that, we can enjoy eating a lot of sea food like raw fish and oyster.

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They are really fresh.

>> Correct.
As a result, I strongly recommend to visit to Tongyeong for the reasons.

>> As a result, I strongly recommend to visit Tongyeong for these reasons.