Name something you would like to improve about yourself and why.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to improve sociability.
Because, we need other help when we are working and living. so a sociability is one of the important skills for our lives.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]! Thank you for sharing about something you\'d like to improve about yourself. I do hope you get to achieve this soon.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I want to improve sociability. Because, we need other help when we are working and living.
>>I want to improve my sociability because we often need help from others in both work and life.
so a sociability is one of the important skills for our lives.
>>Sociability is an important skill for our overall well-being.
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