Name three activities you don’t want to do with your friends and explain why.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t want some activities with my friends.
First, Operations business with friends is not good. I can see many cases easily that friendship become worse because of business.
Second, Money transaction also isn\'t good.
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I don\'t want some activities with my friends.
>> I don’t want to do some activities with my friends.
First, Operations business with friends is not good. I can see many cases easily that friendship become worse because of business.
>> First, doing business with friends is not a good idea. I have seen many cases where friendships became worse because of business.
Second, Money transaction also isn\'t good.
>> Second, money transactions are also not good.
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