Name three persons who do you think who can help you in times of need and why did you choose those p

2018-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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May.1.2018 Please check your homework below (Answer the question into 5-6 sentences only.) >> Name three persons who do you think who can help you in times of need and why did you choose those people. My father, mother and siblings can help and support to me. My family can assist me when I am in trouble such as finance, I can get some advice when I’m doing something or life advice and etc. Since I was young. I really was troublemaker in the home and my family had understood. That’s why I choose those people.

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Hi, Yeong:)

Thank you so much ^^

Please check your corrections below




My father, mother and siblings can help and support to me.
>> My father, mother and siblings can help me in times of need.

 My family can assist me when I am in trouble such as finance, I can get some advice when I’m doing something or life advice and etc.
>> My family can help or guide me when I am in trouble for example, in terms of finances, I can get some advice when I’m doing something or a life advice and etc.

Since I was young. I really was troublemaker in the home and my family had understood. That’s why I choose those people.
>> Since I was young. I really was a troublemaker at home and my family already understood that. That’s why I choose them as those people who can help me in times of need.

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