Name three persons who do you think who can help you in times of need and why did you choose those p
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My father, mother and siblings can help and support to me.
>> My father, mother and siblings can help me in times of need.
My family can assist me when I am in trouble such as finance, I can get some advice when I’m doing something or life advice and etc.
>> My family can help or guide me when I am in trouble for example, in terms of finances, I can get some advice when I’m doing something or a life advice and etc.
Since I was young. I really was troublemaker in the home and my family had understood. That’s why I choose those people.
>> Since I was young. I really was a troublemaker at home and my family already understood that. That’s why I choose them as those people who can help me in times of need.
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