NATAS travel fair (in singapore)

2013-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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I had been to 'NATAS' last sunday. The fair was opened in EXPO building. They had many people who want a travel So, I was too crowded to walk and very tired, soon. Korea teams shared local food 'Bibimbab' All Singaporean said that it was delicious. I agree with their opinion. I think, traveling korea is wonderful. Because there are lots of healthy food and exciting tourist attraction. I'm sure They will have a fantastic time in korea.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! I am happy to know about your experience in Singapore about this fair you attended. I hope that you learned from this experience. Anyway, I agree that Korea is also a very beautiful place to visit because of your unique culture too. Thank you for sharing your experience and always take care.:-) T.CHELSEA I had been to \'NATAS\' last sunday. The fair opened in EXPO building. >>I had been to \'NATAS\' last Sunday and the fair opened in EXPO building.They had many people who want a travel >>There were many people who attended the fair.So, I was too crowded to walk and very tired, soon. >>It was too crowded so, it was difficult to pass by and soon I felt very tired. Korea teams shared local food \'Bibimbab\' >>Korean teams shared a local food called \'BiBimbab\'.All Singaporean said that it was delicious. I agree with their opinion. >>All the Singaporeans said that it was delicious and I agree with their opinion.I think, traveling korea is wonderful. Because there are lots of healthy food and exciting tourist attraction. >>I think traveling in Korea is wonderful because there are a lot of healthy foods and exciting tourist attractions. I\'m sure They will have a fantastic time in korea. >>I\'m sure tourists will have a wonderful time traveling in Korea.:-)

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