Native language

2025-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

I believe that learning in one\'s native language is more efficient. This is because when people learn something in one\'s foreign language, they tend to think and understand it by translating it into their native language.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [Name]! Great analysis, but remember to avoid generalizations. Adding more nuance to your argument could make it more persuasive. It would be great to see more connections between your points and how they relate to the larger theme of the essay! ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I believe that learning in one\'s native language is more efficient. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
This is because when people learn something in one\'s foreign language, they tend to think and understand it by translating it into their native language.
>>> CORRECT~!^^

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·