Native speaking and TOEIC exam score

Let me write my motivation in studying the English language. The motivation is native speaking and TOEIC exam score. Now is global society. Later I may go abroad or meet foreign someone in the inside of the country. For this reason I feel importance of an international language. The international language is an English. In this situation, I must speak a foreigner naturally. Native speaking English is not selection but necessary today. I must study TOEIC hard because TOEIC score is important in getting a job. There are many elements in job success. TOEIC score is essential element above all. A lot of personnel manager judge by the score if an applicant is employed. Speaking and TOEIC, mentioned above, make study me English. I continue to study English until accomplish two targets.

Hello there Jun!! A pleasant Monday morning~~ Thanks for sending me this and for sharing your motivations with me. Please keep this in mind coz it may help you whenever you feel down along the process of learning! Let\'s always be active in class! By the way, please check the corrections I made here! Have a great day and see you! T.Kristel Let me write my motivation in studying the English language. >> CORRECT!! The motivation is native speaking and TOEIC exam score. Now is global society. >> My motivation is native speaking and TOEIC exam score since we are now in a global society. Later I may go abroad or meet foreign someone in the inside of the country. >> Later, I may go abroad or meet foreign people within the country. For this reason I feel importance of an international language. >> For this reason, I feel the importance of the international language.  The international language is an English. In this situation, I must speak a foreigner naturally. >> The international language is English. In those given situations, I must speak  to a foreigner spontaneously.Native speaking English is not selection but necessary today. >> Speaking fluent English is not anymore an option these days but a must.I must study TOEIC hard because TOEIC score is important in getting a job. >> CORRECT!! There are many elements in job success. TOEIC score is essential element above all. >> There are many elements to be successful in getting a job but having a good TOEIC score is the most essential element above all.  A lot of personnel manager judge by the score if an applicant is employed. >> A lot of people in the HRD hire applicants based on their scores.Speaking and TOEIC, mentioned above, make study me English. >> Speaking and TOEIC scores as mentioned motivate me to study English.I continue to study English until accomplish two targets. >> I will continue studying English until I accomplish my two targets.