Natural disaster
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I scared about earthquake.
Every natural disasters become to quietly and quickly.
But eartquake, it is crack the ground and fall down the building.
And it can be some kind of any heavy weight thing drop on the people.
I have saw in the TV news earthquake didasters, it was very horrible and scared.
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Hi Ann:)
Me too! That scares me a lot as well. :(
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I scared about earthquake.
>> I am scared of earthquakes.
Every natural disasters become to quietly and quickly.
>> Every natural disaster happens quietly and quickly.
But eartquake, it is crack the ground and fall down the building.
>> But when it comes to earthquakes, it cracks the ground and make buildings fall down.
And it can be some kind of any heavy weight thing drop on the people.
>> It can make heavy things fall down on people.
I have saw in the TV news earthquake didasters, it was very horrible and scared.
>> I have seen this on the news. It is very horrible and scary.
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