natural disasters
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Due to environmental pollution, the abnormal climate phenomenon is increasing than before.
Therefore, I think that the displaced people around the world because of natural disasters is also increasing.
Because it is irresistible natural disasters. We need to help them live well again.
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What\'s your thought on the displaced people around the world as a result of natural disasters?
Due to environmental pollution, the abnormal climate phenomenon is increasing than before.
>> The abnormal climate change has been increasing more than before owing to environmental pollution.
Therefore, I think that the displaced people around the world because of natural disasters is also increasing.
>> Therefore, I think the number of displaced people around the world as a consequence of natural disasters has also been growing.
Because it is irresistible natural disasters. We need to help them live well again.
>> [NOTE: I\'M NOT SURE WHAT YOU MEAN BY \"Because it is irresistible natural disasters.\" BELOW IS MY INTERPRETATION.]
>> Since we are people in front of natural disasters, we need to help them live well again.
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