Nature
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It is said that humans control nature, but this is impossible. Human beings are damaging nature, and nature is becoming more powerful, making weather changes. I wanted to talk to you about this
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>> It is said that humans control nature, but it\'s impossible.
Human beings are damaging nature, and nature is becoming more powerful, making weather changes.
>> Human beings are damaging the nature, and nature is powerful enough to change the weather.
I wanted to talk to you about this.
>> This is what I wanted to say.
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