Nature

2017-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Mia

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Name 3 things in nature you find most beautiful? I think that the most beautiful names of nature are Victoria Falls , pine tree and sunflower. First, Victoria Falls is suitable its name. It was heard very cool. Second, the name of pine tree is cute. A pine cone is cute too. Last, the name of sunflower is very peaceful, cool, and pretty.

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~~ Teacher Mia ~~

I think that the most beautiful names of nature are Victoria Falls , pine tree and sunflower.
First, Victoria Falls is suitable its name. It was heard very cool.
Second, the name of pine tree is cute. A pine cone is cute too.
Last, the name of sunflower is very peaceful, cool, and pretty.

>> I think that the most beautiful things in nature are Victoria Falls, pine trees and sunflowers.

First I say it is Victoria Falls and it suits its name. It sounded very cool.

Second the name pine tree is cute. A pine cone is cute too.

Lastly the name of sunflower sounds very peaceful, cool and pretty.

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