NBA clothes and Mlb clothes
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I bought some clothes on my birthday.
>> Correct
The brand of the clothes was nba and mlb.I bought the clothes for 300 dollars.
>> The brand of the clothes are NBA and MLB and I bought them for $300.
My mom bought for it because my clothes became short.
>> My mom bought it for me because my old clothes are already short.
I wore clothes when I was elementary school. And this year I grew up for 7cm so I need a bigger one.
>> I wore the same clothes when I was in elementary. This year, I grew taller for about 7cm, so I needed a bigger one.
I bought a 4t-shirt and 2pants. And one pants there was a no size so I ordered it.
>> I bought 4 T-shirts and 2 pants. I don\'t have a size for the one pants so I had to order it.
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