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2015-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

So, companies where want to hire employees focus on the applicant's practical business ability and executive ability. Actually, When we work in the field, Workers seldom use English. By the way company always ask applicants high Toeic score. To get high toeic score, Job seeker use to spend a lot of efforts and energy and money.

강사 첨삭

Hello again Mr. [Name]! Thanks again for another discursive discussion on our topic for today.

And I am looking forward for another one tomorrow. kkk.

Enjoy this lovely Tuesday and take care!

Always,

Kathrine ^^

So, companies where want to hire employees focus on the applicant\'s practical business ability and executive ability.

>> So, companies which are hiring employees focus on the applicant\'s practical business and executive ability.
Actually, When we work in the field, Workers seldom use English.

>> correct!

By the way company always ask applicants high Toeic score.

>> correct!

To get high toeic score, Job seeker use to spend a lot of efforts and energy and money.

>> To get a high TOEIC score, job seekers use to spend a lot of efforts and energy and money.

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