Near my house

2017-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Megan

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It's been a 8 months to live current house with my wife. there are a lot of attractive place near my house. Many people line in a raw at the Bakery, which is famous for bread , in front of my house when I came here for the first time. I can eat moisty and fresh bread as a breakfast every morning. And me and my wife agreed upon that it's the most leisure moment when we get a blow in the Seoul forest, which is 10 minutes away my house. Recently we're so sorry that we can't go after we got back from work since weather is getting cold. Putting our legs in small stream feels me really fresh in summer. Finally we often go to "the Street of cafe". There are many characterful cafes here. One cafe, has vintage atmosphere ,places in an empty warehouse. It's good place to lost in thought. We are really delighted that we have such a lovely places near house.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!


I believe you are lucky to have a great neighborhood! Hope that you enjoy discovering the beauty around  your house.

REMEMBER:

Indefinite and Definite Articles

The words a, an, and the are special adjectives called articles.


Indefinite Articles a, an

an-Used before singular count nouns beginning with a vowel (a, e, i, o, u) or vowel sound:

An apple, an elephant, an issue, an orange


a-Used before singular count nouns beginning with consonants (other than a, e, i, o, u):

A stamp, a desk, a TV, a cup, a book


Definite Article-The

Can be used before singular and plural, count and non-count nouns


1. Indefinite Article (a, an)
Used before singular nouns that are unspecified:

-A pencil
-An orange


Used before number collectives and some numbers:

-A dozen
-A gallon


Used before a singular noun followed by a restrictive modifier:

-A girl who was wearing a yellow hat


Used with nouns to form adverbial phrases of quantity, amount, or degree:

- I felt a bit depressed.


2. Definite Article (the)
Used to indicate a noun that is definite or has been previously specified in the context:

-Please close the door.
-I like the clothes you gave me.


Used to indicate a noun that is unique:

-Praise the Lord!
-The Columbia River is near here.


Used to designate a natural phenomenon:

-The nights get shorter in the summer.
-The wind is blowing so hard.


Used to refer to a time period:

- I was very na�ve in the past.
- This song was very popular in the 1980s.


Used to indicate all the members of a family:

- I invited the Bakers for dinner.
- This medicine was invented by the Smiths.


Hope it helps you!! ^_^

~Teacher Megan~


HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS

It\'s been a 8 months to live current house with my wife. there are a lot of attractive place near my house.

>> It\'s been 8 months since me and my wife started to live in our current house. There are a lot of attractive places near my house.


Many people line in a raw at the Bakery, which is famous for bread , in front of my house when I came here for the first time.

>> When I came here for the first time, many people lines up at the Bakery in front of my house . It is famous for it\'s great breads.


I can eat moisty and fresh bread as a breakfast every morning.

>> I can eat moist and fresh bread  for breakfast every morning.


And me and my wife agreed upon that it\'s the most leisure moment when we get a blow in the Seoul forest, which is 10 minutes away my house.

>> And me and my wife agreed  that it\'s the most leisure moment when we get a blow in the Seoul forest, which is 10 minutes away from my house.


Recently we\'re so sorry that we can\'t go after we got back from work since weather is getting cold.

>> Recently we\'re so sorry that we can\'t go after coming back from work since the weather is getting cold.


Putting our legs in small stream feels me really fresh in summer.

>>  Putting our legs in a small stream feels  really fresh in the summer.


Finally we often go to \"the Street of cafe\". There are many characterful cafes here.

>> Finally, we often go to \"the Street of cafe\". There are many characterful cafes here.


 One cafe, has vintage atmosphere ,places in an empty warehouse. It\'s good place to lost in thought.

>> One cafe, has a vintage atmosphere or places in an empty warehouse. It\'s good place to  get lost in thought.


We are really delighted that we have such a lovely places near house.

>> Correct. 

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