neck disk
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One of my cowokers got neck disk.
She needs to have surgery so she will not work during a month.
In Korea, neck disk is the main disease to teachers.
Because there is computer in the desk so teachers have to fold
their neck to watch computer screen.
She gave me some advice that I have to often move my neck up and down.
I wish her surgery is sucessful.
Jessica, thank you for your correction!^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! really hope that your co-worker's surgical operation would be successful. Yes, you must have to observe good posture always especially in your job.
I'll see you tomorrow, [이름]!Thank you!
One of my cowokers got neck disk.
>>>One of my co-workers got a neck disk disease.
She needs to have surgery so she will not work during a month.
>>>She needs to be operated so she will not work for one month.
In Korea, neck disk is the main disease to teachers.
>>>correct ^^
Because there is computer in the desk so teachers have to fold
their neck to watch computer screen.
>>>Because they need to work with their neck bended to watch the computer screen.
She gave me some advice that I have to often move my neck up and down.
>>>She gave some advices that I have to move my neck up and down often.
I wish her surgery is sucessful.
>>>I wish her surgery will be successful.
Jessica, thank you for your correction!^^
>>>Jessica, thank you for corrections!^^
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