Neighbor relations
학생이 쓴 원문
He shared with the next house if he has anything delicious. He was always intimated with his next house. He was communicated with many other people. This was the scene which I saw only 45 years ago in the city and country. This scene can no longer be seen. The city was filled with the apartment, the country had changed thatched-house into a Western-style house. These days, thatched-roof houses are rare even in the country. The wall of human relations has increased as well as a high and strong house. The people in the world are getting hard-hearted. The old days, there was affection among the people. Neighbors were friendlier to each other in the past than now. Now, it may be because the world is wider and there is a lot work to do. The people of the past is a work to meet people, the people of now is a work to surfing the net. Human relations is little by little decreasing. I long for warm human affection.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Many people now have the \'I-don\'t-care\' attitude. You are right, together with ever growing high rising buildings are the walls constructed between people. It\'s very sad but I think it will even get worse in the future.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
He shared with the next house if he has anything delicious.
>> If he has anything delicious, he shared it to his neighbor.
He was always intimated with his next house.
>> He was always intimate to his closest neighbor.
OR>> He had close relationship with his neighbors.
He was communicated with many other people.
>> He had communicated with many other people.
This was the scene which I saw only 45 years ago in the city and country.
>> This was the scene which I saw only 45 years ago in the city and in the countryside.
This scene can no longer be seen.
>> correct!
The city was filled with the apartment, the country had changed thatched-house into a Western-style house.
>> The city was filled with apartments, in the countryside thatched-house changed into a Western-style house.
These days, thatched-roof houses are rare even in the country.
>> correct!
The wall of human relations has increased as well as a high and strong house.
>> The wall of human relations has increased together with the high and strong house.
The people in the world are getting hard-hearted.
>> correct!
The old days, there was affection among the people.
>> In the old days, there was affection among the people.
Neighbors were friendlier to each other in the past than now.
>> Neighbors were friendlier to each other in the past compared to now.
Now, it may be because the world is wider and there is a lot work to do.
>> correct!
The people of the past is a work to meet people, the people of now is a work to surfing the net.
>> The people in the past worked to meet people, the people now work to surf the \'net.
Human relations is little by little decreasing.
>> correct!
I long for warm human affection.
>> correct!
Many people now have the \'I-don\'t-care\' attitude. You are right, together with ever growing high rising buildings are the walls constructed between people. It\'s very sad but I think it will even get worse in the future.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
He shared with the next house if he has anything delicious.
>> If he has anything delicious, he shared it to his neighbor.
He was always intimated with his next house.
>> He was always intimate to his closest neighbor.
OR>> He had close relationship with his neighbors.
He was communicated with many other people.
>> He had communicated with many other people.
This was the scene which I saw only 45 years ago in the city and country.
>> This was the scene which I saw only 45 years ago in the city and in the countryside.
This scene can no longer be seen.
>> correct!
The city was filled with the apartment, the country had changed thatched-house into a Western-style house.
>> The city was filled with apartments, in the countryside thatched-house changed into a Western-style house.
These days, thatched-roof houses are rare even in the country.
>> correct!
The wall of human relations has increased as well as a high and strong house.
>> The wall of human relations has increased together with the high and strong house.
The people in the world are getting hard-hearted.
>> correct!
The old days, there was affection among the people.
>> In the old days, there was affection among the people.
Neighbors were friendlier to each other in the past than now.
>> Neighbors were friendlier to each other in the past compared to now.
Now, it may be because the world is wider and there is a lot work to do.
>> correct!
The people of the past is a work to meet people, the people of now is a work to surfing the net.
>> The people in the past worked to meet people, the people now work to surf the \'net.
Human relations is little by little decreasing.
>> correct!
I long for warm human affection.
>> correct!
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