Neighborhood
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] What\'s your ideal neighborhood?
It is now.
Because last house was wide but it was 1st floor so it had so many insects and centipeeds.
But now, our house is wide and it\'s 4th floor so it doesn\'t have so many insects and centipeeds.
And my room is so big and we have a cloth room.
I like my resent house!
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Here\'s your corrected composition, [이름]!
Well done! Catch you on Wednesday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] What\'s your ideal neighborhood?
It is now.
Because last house was wide but it was 1st floor so it had so many insects and centipeeds.
>> My current neighborhood is my ideal one because although my previous house was spacious, it was on the 1st floor so it had so many insects and centipedes. [Note the correct spelling of \"centipedes\".]
But now, our house is wide and it\'s 4th floor so it doesn\'t have so many insects and centipeeds.
>> But our current house is not only roomy but it\'s also on the 4th floor so it doesn\'t have so many insects and centipedes. [Note the correct spelling of \"centipedes\".]
And my room is so big and we have a cloth room.
>> And my room is so big and we have a clothes room.
>> OR: Also, my room is relatively spacious and we have a wardrobe.
I like my resent house! [Note the correct spelling of \"recent\".]
>> I certainly like my present house!
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