neighborhood
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강사 첨삭
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Don\'t forget to use articles and prepositions and always check the verb tenses. Your listening skills need some improvement as well. I suggest you listen to our recordings and try to transcribe it to see if you fully understood everything
~Teacher Megan~
Unfortunately, I can\'t remember a neighborhood who was special and close ever.
>> Unfortunately, I can\'t remember a neighbor who was special and close to me.
when I was young, of course we had a good neighbor, but they\'re housewife, so close to my mom. and after I grown up, I just have less chance to get along with neighbor.
>> when I was young, of course we had some good neighbors, but they\'re housewives, so they are close to my mom.
and after I grown up, I just have less chance to get along with neighbor.
>> after I grew up, I had less chances to get along with neighbor.
because people who want to live individually with no attention is more bigger. besides I\'m not an active person.
>> Because people who wants to live individually with no attention is more successful, besides I\'m not an outgoing person.
so I\'m telling about neighbor now.
>> So I\'ll be telling about these neighbors now.
the neighbor are couple who has two adorable babies.
>> Our neighbor are a couple with two adorable babies.
a man is curt, but so sweet to his babies.
>> The man is curt, but he is so sweet to his babies.
he go to playground with babies often after he got off work, and drive his car to go trip together weekend. and about a woman, I\'ve met just few times, actually I don\'t know her exactly.
>> He goes to the playground with his babies often after he got off from work, and drive his car for a trip together on the weekend.
and about a woman, I\'ve met just few times, actually I don\'t know her exactly.
>> As for the woman, I\'ve just met her for a few times, actually I don\'t know her exactly.
Sometime I\'m seeing this family and imagine our family after we had baby.
>> Sometimes when I see this family and I imagine how my family would be like after we had a baby.
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